I Need Help With My Plot Please?
Question by Lacey ?: I need help with my plot please?
Dale Cooper is 17 and has recently moved to the city and hasn’t made any new friends at his new school. One day he bumps into a Kyle. Kyle is a bully and makes Dale’s school life a living hell. Kyle starts beating Dale but stopped by a boy who pulls him off Dale beats him up. The boy introduces himself as Wesley Devonport. Wesley invites Dale to a party at his house later that night. Dale agrees and is kind of in awe of Wesley, he’s charming and laid back. Later that night he goes to Wesley’s house which happens to be a beautiful mansion. The party is wild. Dale gets introduced to Oliver “Ollie” Bennett and James Lawrence, they are Wesley’s best friends. Dale indulges himself in everything offered and wakes up in the mansion next to Charlotte Devonport, Wesley’s older sister.
So now Dale is aware that Wesley and his friends are wealthy and the party gave him a taster of the life he would like to live. He wakes up and is met by Wesley, Ollie and James. They start walking down to the basement, Wesley has a cattle brand in his hand. Dale is confused and asked where they are going. Wesley explains that if he wants to be part of their group he will have to use the brand. Dale thinks there is going to be a cow or something waiting in the basement so when he gets there he finds a disturbing surprise. There is a naked girl tied up, badly hurt/bloody and crying. Dale is afraid but also desperate and so, he brands the girl on her thigh. Wesley films the whole thing.
Wesley and James leave. Dale tries calming the girl down but she passes out and Ollie tells Dale that he doesn’t know what he’s let himself in for. He disagrees with Wesley’s ways but is basically ruled by him. He also tells him that the girl he just branded was kidnapped by Wesley “for fun”. He knows he should go to the police but he is quite cowardly and is afraid to. A few hours later Dale, Ollie and Charlotte go to check on the girl and find that she is dead. Wesley and James were already there. They don’t seem to be bothered by it and make it clear that they had fun with her before she died. Dale tries to make Wesley phone the police/ambulance but Wesley says no and says that he will have to show the police the video if Dale does phone them (the video of Dale branding the girl). They dump the girls body. Over the next few weeks Dale gets sucked into a dangerous world of crime, drugs and a reluctant relationship with Charlotte who is needy.
I have no idea what i want to happen next.
I want it to be a dark, gritty sort of thriller.
ANY IDEAS?
Thanks!
P.S i have posted this before but i changed some things.
Best answer:
Answer by katy
from what I’ve read, it sounds like an interesting story.
Well, you can add that the main character tries to get away, so now he has the group of kids coming after him.
Or, the main character can try to call the police but he gets caught by them in the action, and so now he is on the run for his life b/c they are going to kill him now, b/c they can’t have anyone tell. Or something like that. Or just write about the bad stuff these kids have done, and what it took for him to get out, and get the other boys in jail.
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hope i helped.
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