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On January 20th, 2007 I moved from the large city of San Diego, California to a small town of Spartanburg, South Carolina. Where I did not know anyone not even my own family that lived in Spartanburg. I had to start all over my friends, school, house, and life. On the morning of January 20th, 2007 I packed my suitcase and got ready to leave the city that I cherished and grew up in. To leave my family, friends, school, and life. Later that night around 8:30 pm I said my goodbyes to my family and friends. Saying goodbye to my family and friends that I would not see for a long time did not make me sad. Around Nine o’clock pm we packed the car and drove off to the airport. We arrived at the airport and checked in. while waiting for the plane to come went to McDonald’s and got some food. Then I went to the book store to get some magazines to read. The plane arrived at ten o’clock. While going aboard the plane and talking my seat I still was not sad about leaving. Then the plane took off that was a bittersweet moment, that’s where I started to turn sad. The fight took three hours, we finally arrived.
We arrived at Charlotte/Douglas International Airport at around five o’clock in the morning. We got our luggage and saw my aunt and uncle that were picking us up. When I went outside the airport it was colder than I expected it would be. I was also very tired and cold. I and my mom and sister went with my aunt and my dad and brother went with my uncle. We took a short two hour drive at that time it seemed like I took forever to get to Spartanburg. While driving my impressions of North Carolina was that it was bare and there are too many trees, dark and uninteresting and the freeways were small and it was not busy. When we got to Spartanburg I thought where are we? There is nothing here; this city is very small and different from San Diego. There are a whole lot of trees and the houses look different cause of the ranch style homes, the streets were also smaller. The first place that I went to was my aunt’s house. My dad and brother was not behind us cause some how they got lost. I asleep on their sofa because I was not use to the three hour time differences. We stayed at their house for an hour. We later on went to my uncle’s house the place that I was going to stay before we got settled. My dad and brother finally came an hour later. Most of the people were not home because they all went to a funeral. The only people home was m y cousin that I did not know and their dog and us. The funeral was over and they invited some more family to come over and say hi. My first day I did not eat and a slept all day long. The first week I got closer to my new family.
I started school a week later I went to L.E Gable Middle school. I was not use to the indoor halls. My first couple of weeks I did no make any friends. My first friend was Chelsea Casey. Moving to South Carolina was a good thing for me because I was skipping school and going out a lot. Moving here has also been good for my family; my parents have more free time now. It was very good for my brother to move here because he was on the road of kill himself by using drugs, he is doing well now.
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Answer by laughgrl13
hmm… it sounds like a good story( biography?) and i like the basic structure, though some of the sentences are a little simple and strait forward… a little more imagery and detail would be good!
other than that i really liked it!
hope this helps
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